DRAFT VIDEO AND FEEDBACK

 
Things my target audience liked:
- My audience thought that the narrative was clear and easy to understand.
- They also believed that the locations reflected our genre well and were well lit.
- They thought that the actor matched the song and had a good presence.

Things we need to improve on:
- Our target audience said that the cutting needs to be cleaner. In particular the cutting to black in between clips. To solve this issue we will fill the gaps to prevent random cuts to a blank screen  
- They told us that some of the match cuts needed to fixed. For example, the door is shown opening twice when we should see the actor knocking on the door, then a cut to the door opening and then a cut back to the actor walking through the door. To fix this we will cut and arrange the clips so that we do not see the door opening twice
- My target audience said that we should try and fix unsteady camera work. If we are able to we will refilm clips that are unsteady or we will replace these clips with better footage   
- They also thought that some of the lip synching needs to be fixed up. To solve this we will look over the clips and recut some of our footage so that we can sync the clips to the audio better